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Wednesday, November 30, 2005

Sensory Details - Afraid #2

Do you ever feel afraid? Think about what you would feel in this type of situation. It was almost as if the sun were looking for a way to shine in to the ancient shack sending a light of warmth into it. You could l old cheese as you walk into an mouse trap letting it snap on your foot causing great pain. You walk by a locker and it crosses the top of your shoulder, slams shut sounding off a high pitched eek mostly from the rusted hinges. Suddenly, it turns to dead silence and you stand there, wondering curiously, what could happen next.

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Thursday, November 3, 2005

Sensory Details - Afraid

The sun was peeking inside of the ancient, torn up shack sending a light of warmth into it. You could smell old cheese as you slowly walk into an old mouse trap letting it snap on your foot causing great pain. You accidently walk by one of six empty lockers letting cut your shoulder. It closes sounding off a high pitched eek coming from the rusted hinges. Suddenly, it turns to dead silence and you stand there, wondering what will happen next.

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Modified on November 3, 2005 at 1:52 PM
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