Friendly Letter
Comments: 2
2-8-06
Dear Gwen Stefani,
I would like to thank you for taking time in meeting me at the backstage interview. It was an honor to meet someone like you. You have been one of my favorite singers since I was in the fourth grade, yet that hasn�t changed. Maybe sometime you can see what kind of life I have here in Wyoming, Ohio.
It would be nice if we could do this again in the future. Like maybe with in your next couple of concerts. Although next time we could do something such as see how our lives compare and contrast.
Let me know when we could schedule our next get together. You can call my cell phone when you need anything, 513-256-1978. My e-mail address is [email protected].
Your Friend,
Patty
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Dear Patty,
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2/2 in friendly letter form
2/2 for
.date
.saluatation
.body
.closing
.signature
2/2 for three sentences
2/2 for conponents needed
2/2for correct puncuation
10/10
brunsmana
on March 8, 2006 at 8:10 AM
Patty,Good work. Solid first paragraph. Your second paragraph is a little confusing.
Blog entry is written as a friendly letter 2/2
Friendly letter includes all 5 components 2/2
The body of your letter contains 3 paragraphs with 3 sentences in
each paragraph. 2/2
Your letter contains the components of organization 1/2
Correct use of grammar conventions 2/2
Total 9/10
Good work,
Mrs. Brunsman