Thank You Letter
Comments: 2
3-8-06
Dear Lily and Caitlyn,
Thanks a million for sticking out for me every day. It feels nice to have two of the best friends to lean on. To know that you guys are always there waiting for me with a smile on your faces, makes me glad to be withyou. What more could a twelve-year-old ask for in her life. I hope you know ho muchI am proud to be your friend, and apprieciate when you are there for me when I need you. I will trust you and will depend on you as you depend on me always and forever. Thanks again!!!!
Your friend,
Patty
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marytessi
on March 8, 2006 at 2:06 PM
Patty,Great job on writing in friendly letter form. 2/2
You have the correct format but you only get a 1/2 becase you did not align the closing and your name correctly.
Great job with supporting details. 2/2
1/2 on the correcting the grammar because you have words that are together that should not be.
Out of all you did a great job and you got a 8/10!
Graded by Mary Tess Irvine
jtubbs
on April 20, 2006 at 3:13 PM
Patty,This is a very nice letter. I'm glad that you have such good friends.
--Is a thank you letter 2/2
--Included all 5 components 2/2
--Included a thank you statement for your topic sentence & a cohesive paragraph with supporting details 2/2
--Varying sentence beginnings, strong word choices, connected thoughts 2/2
Correct grammar conventions 0/2 - one misspelled word, you need a question mark after one of your sentences
Total 8/10
Good work,
Mr. Tubbs