My best piece was my friendly letter because I think I had good sentence fluency, and I had no misspelled words on this piece. I only had a few good word choices in this piece.
    I want to improve my sentence fluency part 1 piece because it was one of our first pieces. I had a lot of misspelled words and my sentences didn't make that much sense.
    My goal is to make my sentency fluency better by writing at least 4 sentences that make sense. I will edit to have correct spellings and only 2 misspellings in each entry.

     My best piece was my friendly letter because I think I had good sentence fluency, and I had no misspelled words on this piece. I only had a few good word choices in this piece.
    I want to improve my sentence fluency part 1 piece because it was one of our first pieces. I had a lot of misspelled words and my sentences didn't make that much sense.
    My goal is to make my sentency fluency better by writing at least 4 sentences that make sense. I will edit to have correct spellings and only 2 misspellings in each entry.

2/8/06

Dear Elana,
    

    Thank you so much for the build-a-bear you and the girls brought me over and then stayed over and played for a little bit. Playing Scene It. with our parents and then making your mom?s famous chocolate chip cookies. It was so much fun with you over my house.
    My build-a-bear, Jess Jr. sleeps with me and my other build-a-bear, Jake. They are so in love with each other that they want to get married one day. Jess Jr. is so adorable with all her hearts all over her.
I can?t wait until you come over and play with me again. Call me at 513-999-3333 so we can plan another play date. See you soon.

Your pal,
Jessyka
 

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