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Self-Reflection

My best blog entry is Friendly letter.My sentences vary in differrent lengths. I used very discriptive words that linger in your mind.I have no spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors.
    My not so good blog entry is I Ate Lunch. I need to put my sentences in sequence. I need more words that are discriptive.Also I need to remember to put commas after adverbs.
    My goal is to put at least 3 disciptive words in my sentences in each of my blogs.

Friendly letter

Dear, Billy Joe

    I had fun at your end of the year pool party. I had got to see a lot of my friends. I haven?t seen them in  a long time. I Hope you liked the present I gave you. I liked going to Lazer Web and eating the pizza.
    When we got back and went outside on the trampoline your dog jumped on me. It was a long ride but I had fun. Next year you should have a pool and laser tag party again. Invite me next year so I can see you again.
    And when you fell into the pool it was funny. Probably everyone thought it was funny. Your pool is awesome and big, well at least bigger than mine.
    Hope to see you next year. You can call me at 515-676-6749. Or my e-mail at [email protected] .