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Self-Refection

          My best entry is The Lonely Shed. I started every sentence with a new word instead of I or the at the beginning of all sentences. I used very good word choice like the frustration and impatient. I use good grammar by starting my sentences with a capitalization and ending them with periods.

          My entry that needs improvement is He/She was Upset. I repeat words in my sentence such as I and the. I can replace ordinary words into more discriptive words.  I should always double check that there are no grammar mistakes in my entry.  These are corrections that I will make.

          My main trait I need to work on when I next write an entry is to check for good sentance fluency.  I should use more exciting and descriptive words.  I will need to start every sentance differently.  I need to make my entry specific, measurable, achievable, reachable, and trackable.

Friendly Letter

Dear Ciera,

    Thank you for inviting me to your new home. You are going to love your new home.  I am happy that we can stay in touch. Glad that you have made friends already.  Make sure that you call me every now and then.
    I hope that your Halloween, Christmas, and New Year was good.  Mrs.Brunsman, Mrs.Bolton, Mr.tubs, Patty, Lily, and everyone else (including me) miss you.  We all still think about and hope that you still think about us.  I got a new PS2 for Christmas with a new game.  What did you get for Christmas?
    Make sure to visit Wyoming again.  Everyone will be happy to see you again.  Say hi to everyone for me.  Remember to call me at (513)-821-0809 and e-mail me by [email protected].  Write back.