coleke

    I think that my friendly letter had good, detailed sentences. It also had descriptive word choices ALSO, IT HAD NO SPELLING OR GRAMMAR ISSUES.
    I WOULD LIKE TO IMPROVE MY SENTENCE FLUENCY PIECE BECAUSE I DO NOT THINK THAT I HAD DESCRIPTIVE WORDS. ALSO, I WOULD LIKE TO IMPROVE BY PICKING BETTER WORD CHOICES.
    IN EACH BLOG I WILL WRITE 2 DESCRIBING SENTENCES THAT MAKE SENSE TO THE READER.













         

Dear Bengal?s 2/8/06 I was so happy even thought you guys did not win the supper bowl, you guys did a very good job. I think next year you will win the supper bowl or you will get much farther next year. All you?re fans were cheering an they loved you they were screaming so hard because they like how you play I really hope that I can go to the supper bowl next year win you guy?s will when the supper bowls. Even if you don?t win I will be so so so happy. I hope to see you at the supper bowl next year I hope to get you?re autographs and pictures. Bye. Your Fan, Ke?mon

»1:43 PM    »2 comments     »Send entry    

Posted by: coleke    in: My entries

Modified on May 24, 2006 at 1:40 PM