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Self-Reflection

The best piece I have is sentence fluency.  I think this because in this piece my sentences had a lot of different beginnings in the paragraph.  What I think I need to work on is Strong verbs and adjectives.  Also I need to work on my mechanics in this passage.  I think that I need to have at lest 1 strong verb and 1 adjective.
 
 

Friendly letter

Dear Chuck,

    Hi Chuck thank you for coming to dinner last week. It was so much fun.  Lets do that again, but I am out of town for the next month or two.  
    How are Billy and Tom doing I have not seen them for a long time.  I heard that you are getting a Spider Ferrari.  I?m thinking of getting one, but they are very expensive.  Just asking, were is Billy going to collage?  Is it close or far away?