My best piece is I Planted Flowers.  My sentance fluency is is good.  I have strong sentences, compound sentences, and different beginnings.  For my word choice I have words, words that linger in your mind, and words that are descriptive.  My mechanics are perfect in this piece.  I have no spelling or grammar mistakes in this piece.   
    A piece that I need to work an is Chilled Disgust Part 1.  I do need to work on my sentence fluency because not all of my sentences have compound sentances and they do not start with adverbs, verbs, or adjectives.  My word choice is not very good either.  I do not have words that linger in my mind or words that are descriptive.  I only have one spelling error.  I do not have a topic sentence though.
    One trait that I need to work on is sentence fluency.  I will try to begin every paragraph with a strong topic sentence.