Marytess's Web Log
Reading response for SSR book.
self reflectoin
My best piece is I Planted Flowers. My sentance fluency is is good. I have strong sentences, compound sentences, and different beginnings. For my word choice I have words, words that linger in your mind, and words that are descriptive. My mechanics are perfect in this piece. I have no spelling or grammar mistakes in this piece.
A piece that I need to work an is Chilled Disgust Part 1. I do need to work on my sentence fluency because not all of my sentences have compound sentances and they do not start with adverbs, verbs, or adjectives. My word choice is not very good either. I do not have words that linger in my mind or words that are descriptive. I only have one spelling error. I do not have a topic sentence though.
One trait that I need to work on is sentence fluency. I will try to begin every paragraph with a strong topic sentence.
Posted by: marytessi in: My entries
Modified on February 22, 2006 at 2:11 PM
Friendly Letter
2/08/06
Dear Anna,
Can you believe that we finally got together? Did we have fun or what? I still can�t believe that it is over. It is very disappointing that we won�t see each other for another couple of years.
It was so much fun when we got to go tubing on the Graham�s boat with two other of our boy cousins. That was fun! We beat them bad in the jet-ski race, didn�t we? We laughed so much. I am still laughing today! It was even more fun when we got to go tubing and uncle Jeff flipped us. What was your favorite part?
Well, we had a blast together! Boy, I can�t wait until next year when we might come down to see you and your family. Please keep emailing me as soon as you get home from school! I will try to call you every weekend. I love you so much.
Love,
Mary Tess Irvine
