Friendly letter
Comments: 2
3/8/06
Dear Ms. Bishop,
Thank you so much for helping me with my math. Without you helping me, I would not feel confident to take the achievement test. I was very worried about taking this test, but you have worked hard. To work with you has been great! You are the best teacher and magnificent at teaching and explaining math. Learning math that I did not understand was fun with you. Thankfully, I have you as a math teacher.
Thanks again,
Mary Tess Irvine
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patriciaw
on March 8, 2006 at 2:08 PM
Blog entry is written as a friendly letter 2/2Thank you letter includes......
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The body of your letter contains....
2/2
Your leter contains the components of organization and word choice particularly.....
1.5/2 (One of your sentences is confusing)
YOUR LETTER HAS BEENEDITED FOR CORRECT USAGE OF GRAMMER CONVENTIONS.
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Well done MT!!!!!
Your total comes out to...... 9.5/10
I think Ms. Bishop will appreciate this!!!!
Patty Williams
:):):):):):):):):)
jtubbs
on April 20, 2006 at 1:00 PM
Mary Tess, Good use of varied sentence beginnings and different sentence lengths.
Is a thank you letter 2/2
Included all 5 components 2/2
Included a thank you statement for your topic sentence & a cohesive paragraph with supporting details 2/2
Varying sentence beginnings, strong word choices, connected thoughts 2/2
Correct grammar conventions 2/2
Total 10/10
Good work,
Mr. Tubbs
