To get to from room 201 the water fountain on the third floor, you will have to walk for about four minutes.  You would probably want to get here to quench your thirst, but first you will have to follow the directions given.

*First walk a step out of room 201 and turn right, walk until you meet a staircase.
*Walk another 25 steps on the staircase to get to the third floor.
*Take another right and walk through a hallway of lockers. 
*Youshould pass six doors (two on the right side; three onthe left side; and one straight ahead) before you take another right.
*After you do that, you will take a left which will lead you down another hallway.
*As you keep walking, you will eventually pass the girls restroom.
*Take another left at the end of that hallway, and turn right and again, walk to the end of that hallway.
*Finally,  take another left and walk until you see a water fountain at your left.
*ENJOY!!!

    My best piece is My Love For Reese Cups. My sentences have different beginnings and with in my whole paragraph, I include at least one compound sentence using the words or, and, or but.  My word choice is descriptive and puts a picture of what I am thinking of in my mind.  If I were to add up the amount of spelling errors I made in this entry, the total would be none.

    Apiece that I need to work on would most likely be Frindle Entry #2.  In this entry, there could be some sentence fluency added in some parts.  My word choice doesn�t really put a picture in my mind.  At some points, the entry gets a little confusing.  I made a total of one spelling and grammar errors.   

    So far, my goal is to include two compound sentences.  I also want to improve my word choice by inserting more strong adjectives and verbs.