Thank You Letter
Comments: 3
3/8/06
Dear Leila,
Thank you so much for inviting me to NYC this summer. As you know, I have wanted to visit this marvelous city nearly my entire life. Of all the many things you have done for me, this is the most generous, and one of the most heartfelt. Amazingly, you have selected many of my dream destinations! Broadway, of course, the Plaza, and Saks Fifth Avenue, only to name a few- I could hardly be more elated! Not to say in the least that that it is merely the city that creates the appeal of this trip. There is no one I would prefer to you as my New York companion. I’m am also thrilled that I will be meeting your friends Fran and Lucy, considering that I have heard so many incredible things about them. Only 104 days left!
With much love and anticipation,
Alexandra
Alexandra
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alexandriav
on March 8, 2006 at 2:01 PM
~ Alexandra2/2 Thank you letter form
2/2 for requirements as:
date
salutation
body
closing
name
2/2 contains statement, 2 details,
1/2 orginization and word choise
2/2 edited
congradulations 9/10 !!!!!
brunsmana
on March 15, 2006 at 2:54 PM
Alexandra,Well written letter. Your excitement truly comes through.
Is a thank you letter 2/2
Included all 5 components 2/2
Included a thank you statement for your topic sentence & a cohesive paragraph with supporting details 2/2
Varying sentence beginnings, strong word choices, connected thoughts 2/2
Correct grammar conventions 2/2
Total 10/10
Good work,
Mrs. Brunsman
jtubbs
on April 20, 2006 at 12:24 PM
I look forward to hearing about your trip next year. Hopefully you'll enjoy the city as I much I did when I visited it.