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  Sensory Details-Restlessness

Dingy counters overflowing with scraps of eerily grinding, rusty metal,and floor-piles of grayish wood, broken and creaking under your feet, clutter the dim, musty,old-smelling shack. Paint fumes sneak a cramped feeling from the paint-flecked, shadowy cabinets, and hollowly clanging lockers. A lone, doomed fly buzzes in from a slight crack in a high window, bringing with it a slight, warm breeze that feels sharp against your skin, a stark contrast to the cold aura of metal that lurks here. The abandoned workshed smell of cracked wood and rust leaks up from a filthy cement floor, which is covered in dust that you feel constantly grinding under your feet.