joshs

1. What I liked most about the blogs is that it helped us worked with the computer in writting documents. Also I liked that we didn't have to do a borning old worksheet, but with the blogs we could surf the net and also with the contest it brought the people to under stand blogs and pass the word to the whole world.
2.What I like least about the blogs is that some topics it felt like we were doing another worksheet, but I liked some signments.
3. I think it improved my writting so much.   
4. What I think to make bloging more  enjoy is the colective sories.              

    It was a dark thundering night on June 19 1945.  The thunder was shaking the windows, at the German dungeons were many Americas were keeep wating for they were so skinny from not eating.   r time to escape.  Some of the prisoners had been there for a long time.Joshs

    The prisoners were chuby now they have been there along time. Since they had worn the same clothes they had holes,Smelled bad and their pants fell down because the They liked to play patty cake. Most of them had tatoos. They had muscle flexing contest and had tea parties. When one of them died they left him in the dungeon.One of the prisoners had just joined the army.(Matt Brown)

    "Tomorrow is da day we escape," said Bob. 
    "Yeah tomorrow da day,"  replied Fred.
    They started to get the tools they had gathered from hidden compartments under their beds
    "Hoot...Hoot," hooted Bob.
    This was their signal to get ready.  They were to escape at 10 o'clock exactly.  When the gaurds walked by they knocked their lights out. 
    " Yes"whispered Bob.
     Then they started to quietly unscrew the hinges on the cell doors.
    "SSHHHH" said Bob.
    They all walked down the stairs only to run into a group of gaurds.
    "Hey!!!" one of them said.
    The prisoners charged at then with metal poles and bars.
    THey started to run for the exit when their mothers came in and started to wack them with purses.
    "How dare you try to escaper from prison!" yelled Bobs mom!(Daniel Zimmerman)
    The moms won the battle and were given honorable metal.
   
    So the days went on in the hot box and  they were given little food  and just enough water.   Fred and Bob were in the hot box for two weeks untile their mothers let them out.  After they got back to their cabins they stated on a plan that they would not get caught.  Fred and Bob thought of a plan but they need volinters, so they gathered a meeting with all their friends.  They invited 5 friends each and 6 of them signed up to excape from the evail rath of their mothers.  So on May 18, 1945  they could take out the prizion and excape from the prison for ever.(Sagan)

           They got packed yet again and took out their wepons.  A nail gun and some nails.  They also took out the tool needed to saw their window apart, a nail file!  Then at night they snuck out of bed and began on the long but easy task of killing the guards and breaking through the 1 millimeter thick concrete wall. Then they have to cross stream to the gate. Then as they leave 500,000,000,000 C4 blew up and over 90% of prisoners die.(Matt Brown)
   
    God is watching this whole incident and is thinking to Himself," Hey, I don't want to be too busy righ now!"
    So he sent a ligting bolt that has  magical powers that can make people come back to life.  The prisoners stand up and skae themselves and look around and see the gaurds coming. Theystarted tl run fr their second lives.  But suddenly God notices that in the Bush househld  George has made the people  pay taxes of 200k a month.  So he sends another lightning bolt that kills about 10 people.  He takes out his machine gun 200 and fires.  This special gun fires 2billion rounds a a milli-second.  So they all died. Boo Hoo(Zimmy, the alien from nowhere)