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My Thoughts on Blogging in the classroom!!

1. What I liked most about the blogs is that it helped us worked with the computer in writting documents. Also I liked that we didn't have to do a borning old worksheet, but with the blogs we could surf the net and also with the contest it brought the people to under stand blogs and pass the word to the whole world.
2.What I like least about the blogs is that some topics it felt like we were doing another worksheet, but I liked some signments.
3. I think it improved my writting so much.   
4. What I think to make bloging more  enjoy is the colective sories.              

The Dungeon colective stories by Josh S, Matt B,Daniel Zimmy the illegal alien from mexico

    It was a dark thundering night on June 19 1945.  The thunder was shaking the windows, at the German dungeons were many Americas were keeep wating for they were so skinny from not eating.   r time to escape.  Some of the prisoners had been there for a long time.Joshs

    The prisoners were chuby now they have been there along time. Since they had worn the same clothes they had holes,Smelled bad and their pants fell down because the They liked to play patty cake. Most of them had tatoos. They had muscle flexing contest and had tea parties. When one of them died they left him in the dungeon.One of the prisoners had just joined the army.(Matt Brown)

    "Tomorrow is da day we escape," said Bob. 
    "Yeah tomorrow da day,"  replied Fred.
    They started to get the tools they had gathered from hidden compartments under their beds
    "Hoot...Hoot," hooted Bob.
    This was their signal to get ready.  They were to escape at 10 o'clock exactly.  When the gaurds walked by they knocked their lights out. 
    " Yes"whispered Bob.
     Then they started to quietly unscrew the hinges on the cell doors.
    "SSHHHH" said Bob.
    They all walked down the stairs only to run into a group of gaurds.
    "Hey!!!" one of them said.
    The prisoners charged at then with metal poles and bars.
    THey started to run for the exit when their mothers came in and started to wack them with purses.
    "How dare you try to escaper from prison!" yelled Bobs mom!(Daniel Zimmerman)
    The moms won the battle and were given honorable metal.
   
    So the days went on in the hot box and  they were given little food  and just enough water.   Fred and Bob were in the hot box for two weeks untile their mothers let them out.  After they got back to their cabins they stated on a plan that they would not get caught.  Fred and Bob thought of a plan but they need volinters, so they gathered a meeting with all their friends.  They invited 5 friends each and 6 of them signed up to excape from the evail rath of their mothers.  So on May 18, 1945  they could take out the prizion and excape from the prison for ever.(Sagan)

           They got packed yet again and took out their wepons.  A nail gun and some nails.  They also took out the tool needed to saw their window apart, a nail file!  Then at night they snuck out of bed and began on the long but easy task of killing the guards and breaking through the 1 millimeter thick concrete wall. Then they have to cross stream to the gate. Then as they leave 500,000,000,000 C4 blew up and over 90% of prisoners die.(Matt Brown)
   
    God is watching this whole incident and is thinking to Himself," Hey, I don't want to be too busy righ now!"
    So he sent a ligting bolt that has  magical powers that can make people come back to life.  The prisoners stand up and skae themselves and look around and see the gaurds coming. Theystarted tl run fr their second lives.  But suddenly God notices that in the Bush househld  George has made the people  pay taxes of 200k a month.  So he sends another lightning bolt that kills about 10 people.  He takes out his machine gun 200 and fires.  This special gun fires 2billion rounds a a milli-second.  So they all died. Boo Hoo(Zimmy, the alien from nowhere)

Revenge of Saving the Amazon

    The United States and the Brazilian government are working together to protect the Rain Forest and the Yonomami people. In 1960's the search for gold and homes mostly destroyed the Amazon.  Then in 1991 Brazils government gave 36,000 square miles to the Yanomami people to stop the illegal loggers.  But the illegal loggers are still cutting down the trees when there not suppose to, and 1.8 of the logging is illegal!  Now Brazil and America are putting illegal loggers in jail, and still trying to protect the 12% of the Amazon.   Help save the Amazon!!!

Cheese

            Cheese
There are many types of CHEESE like Blue  string cheese is very good.  There’s other types of cheese like Swiss cheese     
                Cheese
There are many types of CHEESE like Blue  string cheese is very good.  There’s other types of cheese like Swiss cheese    
 WhAT Are othe types of cheese.

Saving the Amazon

    The United States and the Brazilian government are working together to protect the Rain Forest and the Yonomami people.  In the 1960’s many settlers and minors came to the Rain Forest in search for gold and homes.  Then in 1991 Brazils government gave 36,000 square miles to the Yanomami people.  The illegal loggers are still cutting down the trees when there not suppose to, and 1.8 of the logging is illegal.  Now Brazil is getting strict about illegal logging, and still trying to protect the 12% of the Amazon.          

Author letter

Bruce Coville
c/o Harcourt Trade Publishers
525 B Street, Suite 1900
San Diego, CA 92101

Dear Bruce Coville,

    Hi, my name is Josh Sagan from Wyoming Middle School in Ohio.   Your speech at Wyoming Middle School was very inspiring to me to write better and read more.
    Mr. Coville your fantasy books are very detailed, and makes me want to read more.  The thing you said that you should always have your character face a difficult choice that will get him in trouble even if he makes the right decision.  Thank you for telling us that tip, I am writing a book and I have almost 10 pages of intense action.
    I am reading the book My Teacher is an Alien and it is very interesting. Thank you for taking the time to read this letter. Your Books are Great!!!!



Sincerely,


Josh                   

 
 


 

Directions

            How to Get from Mr. Tubbs’ Room to Mr. Zoller’s Room
    You need to walk from Mr.Tubbs’ room to Mr. Zoller’s room in 312.  It will take you about 2 minutes to get to Mr. Zoller’s room and is about 20 yards.  Have fun at Mr. Zoller’s room doing some Social Studies.
∑ At Mr.Tubbs room walk out into the hallway and go left up the two sets of stairs.
∑ When you are up the stairs you will see a water machine on your left.
∑ Then pass four doors, but on your left you will see a water fountain.
∑ Then at the end of the hall go left, and pass 4 more doors
∑ Then take a quick right then left.
∑ On your right you’ll see the men’s bathroom
∑ Then look up and you’ll see a pyramid window.
∑ Then look to your right, you will see two classrooms, the one on the right is Mr.Zollers room.
∑ You will know that you are there because on his window it says Mr. Zoller.         

Friendly letter

Dear Grandpa,
    
    Thank you for inspiring me in science.  You have taught me so much, and whenever we have a science test or project I know what to do.  Thank you for teaching me math and other things.  You are all ways there for everything even with sports and projects.  Everything you do it makes me laugh or go ohhhhhhhh!  But even with your snotty jokes, but they still make me laugh.  So thank you for your help and time with everything you’ve done for me.   I wish you were still hear because I miss you so much.

 

Self-Reflections

My best piece is Sencory Details.  My sentences are that they vary in differant ways. My word choice is verey discripted and I use out of the box words.  I have a few splelling errors in my entry.
    A peice Ineed to work on is spelling and Sentence fluency.  I need to work on splelling because I have alot of errors in my entry.  Sentence  fluency is a thing I need to work on my entry because I don't have enough adverbs, and verbs.
    A goal I want to work on is spelling errors and sentance fluency.   
      

The Friendly Letter

    
    Hi Aslan this is Josh from planet Earth. There are evil people on earth just like the White Witch in Narnia.  There’s have been a lot of wars going on in our world caused by evil people. If she would have came to this world she could have caused mass destuction.
    Aslan you’re a great lion and everybody in Narnia and the Wardrobe World.    I’m glade you came alive or else Peter, and Edmund would have died or turned to stone.  When you knight them make sure you give them some advice.
    If you decide to come to earth tell me when because then I will know when you are coming.  Just when you will come to earth I will have to teach you the rule.  I hope you will come and visit us some day but weir a disguised.


 
 

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