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Self-Reflections

My best piece is Sencory Details.  My sentences are that they vary in differant ways. My word choice is verey discripted and I use out of the box words.  I have a few splelling errors in my entry.
    A peice Ineed to work on is spelling and Sentence fluency.  I need to work on splelling because I have alot of errors in my entry.  Sentence  fluency is a thing I need to work on my entry because I don't have enough adverbs, and verbs.
    A goal I want to work on is spelling errors and sentance fluency.   
      

The Friendly Letter

    
    Hi Aslan this is Josh from planet Earth. There are evil people on earth just like the White Witch in Narnia.  There?s have been a lot of wars going on in our world caused by evil people. If she would have came to this world she could have caused mass destuction.
    Aslan you?re a great lion and everybody in Narnia and the Wardrobe World.    I?m glade you came alive or else Peter, and Edmund would have died or turned to stone.  When you knight them make sure you give them some advice.
    If you decide to come to earth tell me when because then I will know when you are coming.  Just when you will come to earth I will have to teach you the rule.  I hope you will come and visit us some day but weir a disguised.