Comments: 2
3/8/06
Dear Mrs. Bishop,
Thank you so much for helping us in math. Quickly I noticed that the sessions enhanced my grades and I am beginning to like math. It is also beginning to be stimulating. I have been so excited to take tests because I understand it all now. Waiting for the grades back is really tough.
I hope we can to it a lot more. It will really prepare me for math next year, which is probably going to be really difficult. I will miss you next year though. Thanks again.
Your favorite student,
Lily Grace
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lilyg
on March 8, 2006 at 2:12 PM
Lily Grace,this is well written. I like how you used a stronge word choice. Make sure that you know what they mean
Lily,
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Very well written!
Is a thank you letter 2/2
Included all 5 components 2/2
Included a thank you statement for your topic sentence & a cohesive paragraph with supporting details 2/2
Varying sentence beginnings, strong word choices, connected thoughts 2/2
Correct grammar conventions 2/2
Total 10/10
Good work, Mr. Tubbs