Entries "February 2006":

Wednesday, February 22, 2006

Self-Reflection

My best Entry was The Clock Store. It had a variety of sentence beginnings. It had quickly and running. I also used strong verbs. For example, I have bawled for screaming and convey for bring. There is also scurrying, for the word running. I have all my words spelled correctly and the proper grammar.

The entry I need improvement on is my Sensory Details-Lonely. I need to add different sentence beginnings, like instead of using there is, I need to use the room or even I should describe the room. For example, The filthy, smelly room. I also need to use some of the words a little less. For example, old, cold, and dirty. I should use strong verbs, like instead of using old, cold, and dirty all the time, I could use grimy or felt as if you were touching a locker that has just been in Antartica. My spelling doesn't need much improvement, but there are a couple words that are spelled wrong.

My goal is acheivable. I should try to write at least two sentences that start with an adverb, or a word with -ing for each entry I make. I will also use at least four strong verbs in each of my entries. 

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Wednesday, February 15, 2006

Friendly Letter

Dear Will Smith,

    I would just like to thank you so much for the tour of Hollywood and letting Patty and me perform in your concert with you. Do you think we could have a career in singing? Ha, Ha. We had a blast and it was great to see you again. You made it so much fun.
    Maybe next time I can give you a tour of Wyoming, which might not be as exciting as Hollywood, but everybody is really nice. You can even meet my other friends and my family.
    How have you been since? Did you have a good holiday? I had a great holiday, I got a lot of what I want. It was also nice being with my family. Maybe you can come down here for thanksgiving and bring your family also.
    Are you doing any new movies or any new albums? If you are, I am definitely buying them. You are a great actor and singer. I love the old series Prince of Bel Air and your movie Hitch.
    You can call my home phone, 513-821-4532, or my cell phone, 513-376-5504. You can also e-mail me, [email protected].




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