Friendly Letter
Comments: 2
2/08/06
Dear Anna,
Can you believe that we finally got together? Did we have fun or what? I still can�t believe that it is over. It is very disappointing that we won�t see each other for another couple of years.
It was so much fun when we got to go tubing on the Graham�s boat with two other of our boy cousins. That was fun! We beat them bad in the jet-ski race, didn�t we? We laughed so much. I am still laughing today! It was even more fun when we got to go tubing and uncle Jeff flipped us. What was your favorite part?
Well, we had a blast together! Boy, I can�t wait until next year when we might come down to see you and your family. Please keep emailing me as soon as you get home from school! I will try to call you every weekend. I love you so much.
Love,
Mary Tess Irvine
Dear Anna,
Can you believe that we finally got together? Did we have fun or what? I still can�t believe that it is over. It is very disappointing that we won�t see each other for another couple of years.
It was so much fun when we got to go tubing on the Graham�s boat with two other of our boy cousins. That was fun! We beat them bad in the jet-ski race, didn�t we? We laughed so much. I am still laughing today! It was even more fun when we got to go tubing and uncle Jeff flipped us. What was your favorite part?
Well, we had a blast together! Boy, I can�t wait until next year when we might come down to see you and your family. Please keep emailing me as soon as you get home from school! I will try to call you every weekend. I love you so much.
Love,
Mary Tess Irvine
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olivias
on February 15, 2006 at 1:59 PM
~Marytess~2 points for friendly letter form.
2 points for date salutation, body, closing, signature.
2 points for the correct body and paragraphs.
1 point for transitions, thoughts, and conclusion.
2 points for correct grammer.
Together, you get a 9/10 on your friendly letter. GOOD JOB!!!!!
Also, you need to have the date on the right side of the page.
brunsmana
on March 8, 2006 at 9:53 AM
Marytess,Great friendly letter. All your sentences are clear. You raised good questions in your letter.
Blog entry is written as a friendly letter 2/2
Friendly letter includes all 5 components 2/2
The body of your letter contains 3 paragraphs with 3 sentences in
each paragraph. 2/2
Your letter contains the components of organization 2/2
Correct use of grammar conventions 2/2
Total 10/10
Good work,
Mrs. Brunsman
