Thank you letter
Comments: 2
3/08/06
Dear Marie,
Thanks so much for taking me to Perfect North last Friday. Skiing with you was so much fun! Remember when we both fell over when we were trying to get on the ski lift! And when my ski fell off at the top of the slope! That was hilarious! I hope we can do it again sometime. Thanks again.
Your Friend,
Olivia
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matthewb
on March 8, 2006 at 2:01 PM
You did good on writing your blog as a friendly letter_2/2. Perfect format_2/2. It has good content_2/2. Word choice- no same beginnings_2/2.Grammar_2/2.10/10_Perfect
jtubbs
on April 20, 2006 at 3:02 PM
Olivia,--Is a thank you letter 2/2
--Included all 5 components 2/2
--Included a thank you statement for your topic sentence & a cohesive paragraph with supporting details 2/2
--Varying sentence beginnings, strong word choices, connected thoughts 2/2
Correct grammar conventions 2/2
Total 10/10
Good work,
Mr. Tubbs