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My best piece is She Worked Out. My sentences are at a good length, and have good beginings such as ing words, and adverbs. They also have compound sentences in them, and are very descriptive. My word choice is good because the words linger in your mind, and they are very descriptive. I do not have any spelling errors.
A piece that I need to work on is my Sensory details. The sentence fluency was not very good, because I didn't start sentences with ing words, or adverbs, and most of the sentences started with the. My word choice was ok because I used very descriptive words, but I did not use words that lingered in your mind. This piece does not have any spelling errors, or grammar errors.
My goal is to work on sentence begginnings. I will try to use at least one sentence with an adverb or an ing word in each of my blog entries.
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