Entries "February 2006":
Wednesday, February 22, 2006
I think my best blog entry is Favorite Foods. In that blog entry, I used sentence fluency really well. Also, I used good word choice. The way I used good word choice was I put,"All the food there is MAGICALLY DELICIOUS!" instead of putting,"All the food there is good." All my spelling, grammar and punctuation are correct too.
I think the blog entry that needs the most work is Sensory Details- Dirty. In that entry, I didn't use very good senctence fluency. Even though I used a lot of descriptive words, I used some of them in the wrong place. My mechanics were okay. They could've been better.
The trait I need to work one is sentence fluency. My goal is to not start two sentences after eachother with the same word in every blog entry.
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Wednesday, February 8, 2006
Dear Mickey Mouse,
It was so great seeing you in Disney World. I can?t believe you beat me in mini-golf. I really loved riding Splash Mountain with you. You looked really funny in the picture. Also, I really liked the pretzels we bought. They tasted great.
I can?t wait until we plan another trip to see each other again. Maybe next time we can go to King?s Island. Next time I?ll beat you in mini-golf. Maybe, we can ride The Beast. I heard it?s really fun.
I hope we can see each other soon. You can call my phone number. It?s 867-5309. My email is
[email protected].
Your Best Friend,
Travis
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