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    Many of the smart, good-population, have been attacked by zombies looking to steel their good-looking and smart identities. One of the very few that have succeeded in fending off these countless zombie attacks is Jastin McChughes. Fighting of a cohort of Roman zombies while doing  his science homework is one of the famed tails of Jastin McChughes.
    Diligently, Jastin was doing his science homework when he heard the sound of screaming outside. He was determined to finish his science homework so he did not move. He continued to work when he heard a “thump” sound and turned to see a Roman zombie running toward him with more behind him. Jastin jumped at the zombie and ripped of its head than took the short sword and charged at the rest. He ripped up the first few the kicked the rest out of the window so he could continue with his homework.
    The night continued like this for hours until Jastin could fight know longer. He collapsed on the ground and watched the zombies crawl into his room and charged at him. He heard a bang on the door and all his smart, good-looking friends ran in and came to his rescue they all were covered in dirt from destroying so many zombies. They all had short sword and shields and were much more skilled in the deadly arts than he Roman zombies. Soon there were no more zombies left and Jastin could study in peace.    

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brunsmana on January 11, 2006 at 11:57 AM
Jack,
Interesting take on the prompt. You blog entry is very fluent. Each sentence leads into the next. (2 points) You included varying sentence beginings. (2 points) Next time remember to include one sentence of 5 words or less. (1 point) Good use of grammar conventions. (2 points) Continue adding descriptive phrases and clever words. Mrs. Brunsman
Total 7/8

   

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