Entries "March 2006":

Wednesday, March 15, 2006

How to get from Mr.Tubbs room to Mr.Berres office

You neeed to get to Mr.Berrres offfice for a wittness in a moshpit.It will take you roughly about 1 minute to 2 minutes to get there.

*Turn left and go up the stairs.
*When you get up to the third floor you will see a water fender.
*Then walk forward until you see another stairway and turn  left.
*Near the end of the hallway therte will be a door on the right.On the wall next to the door there will be a sign that says Assistant Principal.
*You have arrived at Mr.Berrres office.

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Posted by: joshl    in: My entries
Wednesday, March 8, 2006

Thankyou letter

3/1/06

Dear Dad,

    Thankyou for helping me with my BoyScouts research work.Even though it was kind of embarrassing to have my dad help me on subjects that he would never have any desire to learn about,I needed it and and I enjoyed it. Most of the long laborious hours of reaserch on atoms with protons and some other things that caused the headache that felt like my brain was loosing brain cells by every minute that went by.
Any way I now know all those confusing things because my dad helped me and calmed me down and then eventually I thanked him for it in the letter I’m writing now.The next time I need help with anything I’ll call my dad over to help me instead of him asking me if I need any help.

Love,



Josh

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Posted by: joshl    in: My entries
Wednesday, March 1, 2006

Self-Reflection

    My best entry is called Spritemelon.My sentence fluency is pretty good.It is good because each paragraph stays along with the same topic that it starts with.My sentence fluency is also pretty good because at the end of each paragraph,the last sentence ends that paragraph and kind of starts the topic of the next paragraph.My word choice in Spritemelon is just about as good as it can ever get.I use decription in almost every sentence with figuritive language.My word choice is extremely good because I use very strong verbs .I also use strong adjectives when I'm describing something.
    My worst entry is my friendly letter.My sentence fluency is not good at all.I go off topic several times in each paragraph.I really dont have a topic in each of my topics.My word choice is also not anywhere near as good as I wanted it to be.I dont describe anything at all.I dont use hardly any adjectives and i dont use any strong verbs.And I dont have varied sentence beginings.

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