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Reading response for S.S.R. book
Sensory Details - Dreary
The old shed is very dreary from the inside. Old, blue paint is peeling off the rough, dusty, wooden shelves and cupboards. Dirty, smelly water slowly drips out of cold, scratched pipes in the wall, making a lonely plink on the stone floor. A cold breeze of dusty-smelling air blows a window forward, making it creak and groan. The dim light illuminates abandoned, half-open lockers. Dark, crusty wood lays spread across the cold floor.
Sensory Details - Dreary
The old, blue paint is peeling off the rough, dusty, wooden shelves and cupboards. Cold water lazily drifts through cold, gray, metal pipes in the wall, where a creaky window is letting in cold breeze of dusty-smelling air. The dim light illuminates abandoned, half-open lockers. Dark, crusty wood lays spread across the cold floor.