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Self-Reflection

    My best peice of writing in my blog is They Played Video Games.  I used a varity of different sentence beginnings.  Strong verbs and discriptive adjectives were frequent in the entry, and there were no spelling or grammer errors. 
    A peice I need to work on is Sensory Details- Dreary.  Most sentences started the same and I lacked a topic sentence.  There were too many adjectives in some sentences.  There were little grammer mistakes in that peice.
    My goal is to have two interesting sentence beginnings in each blog enntry.

Friendly letter

Dear Uncle Andy,


    It was great to see you at Samoset. I had a lot of fun at that hotel with you, my family and my cousins. Skiing with you was fun and my favorite part was speeding down the huge hill.
    The meals were really nice there.  The service was fast and the food was always good. I really liked the indoor pool and the hot tubs. The workers got mad at us for running around in the halls and elevators, but I had a great time.
    I hope we can go again sometime soon.  You can call my family and I at 513-761-0000 or send a letter.