Summary #2-The summary is back for more
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Rainforest is being destroyed, but people are trying to keep it
intact to save the natives. People settled in rainforests and much of it was destroyed.
Diseases spread to the native Yanomami people when miners came for gold.
Land was set aside for the Yanomami people and they got help from
outsiders. Much of forest is lost due to logging for valuable wood and
getting soy for the global market. The government in Brazil is
stopping deforestation by declaring land protected and they still think the
rainforest can be saved.
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brunsmana
on May 3, 2006 at 10:05 AM
Mitchell,You've included the necessary components. Now add some transition words and sentences to improve your fluency.
Thanks
Mrs. Brunsman